Wednesday, October 16, 2013

INTREPID

Good news: Mac's started Writers' Workshop. His teacher showed us his first two pieces at his conference today.

The first one was about how happy he was when we got our dog, Skip.

The next one was really impressive. It was about how he either wanted to view the Olympics or compete in the Olympics. He even drew the Olympic rings. And, you can imagine my joy when Mrs. V. told me about how Mac already understands revision.

"After he wrote this, he came back to me and proudly showed me how he changed all the CSs to Xs, because it's O-lym-piX."

I love that.

1 comment:

LH said...

I like to see photographs of good writing by young people. Let's post one or two on the blog this year.